For a week, Teenie became a ghost. She stood near Evelyn during her most cutting remarks to a shy classmate, holding the Portable in her pocket. She lingered outside the debate hall when Evelyn eviscerated an opponent. She even sat two rows behind her in the cafeteria when Evelyn publicly mocked a professor’s stutter, a moment so cruel it made Teenie’s blood run cold.
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If you'd like, I can draft the first three chapters or a 1-page synopsis for query letters. For a week, Teenie became a ghost